Grayskull: Masters of the Universe - Script info!

trinityFri 06/06/08 13:34

Source: Latino Review


Some lucky buggers over at Latino Review had the privilege of getting a sneak peek at the first draft of the new Masters of the Universe movie project. And having read their feedback...it sounds fantastic!


The script was written by Justin Marks (writer behind the new Street Fighter movie), and he's been dubbed by movie gossip site Aint-It-Cool as "the most gainfully employed professional fanboy on the planet right now."


There have been a lot of rumors on the net circling Grayskull's development process, which Latino Review have gone on record by saying "DON'T BELIEVE THE HYPE! It's all bullshit!"


This new vision of Eternia and its characters has been described as Lord of the Rings meets The Matrix, with a dash of Batman Begins thrown in for good measure! Can you picture it?


The story place in Eternia, not a middle Earth on Earth, and LR say that "It's a hard and edgy PG-13 tinkering on a R."....which already sounds lovely :)

The script apparently has no campness or cheesiness...and unfortunately...no Orko either!

Justin takes the MOTU mythology very seriously. Whatever made the cartoon corny is not apparent at all, and there is not a single beat of comedic relief in the script.


Here's what LR had to say about what the general storyline is (according to the first draft):

"We get both the origin of HE-MAN (or HE-MAN BEGINS), the origin of SKELETOR, and the origin of THE POWER SWORD. If Warners even remotely executes this script like they did 300 they will have a monster hit on their hands because this script leaves it open for a trilogy.

GRAYSKULL is the perfect marriage of Sorcery and Science fiction where in Eternia both Fantasy and Technology co-exist. The character arc of the hero ADAM works for me because like Bruce Wayne in BATMAN BEGINS, Adam has to overcome his selfish need for revenge and realise his destiny for the greater good of his people – the fallen son of Eternia must rise to occasion and become HE-MAN."




Interested so far? Read on to get a more detailed feel of the first part:


Before the credits we get this kick ass opening prologue narrated by Evil-Lyn.

SCENE: [Four thousand years go in the workshop of Eternus we open on the powerful hands of a blacksmith forging steel from a raging fire. The hands raise the finished SWORD, an amazing mix of katana and high tech. It generates an OUTWARD LIGHT.]

EVIL-LYN: At the beginning of time, the blacksmith Eternus forged the Sword Of Light, a blade so beautiful that its spark created all life as we know it. After the blacksmith saw what perfection he'd built, he tried in vain to duplicate his mold. Eventually he fell into madness. Angered by his failure, he forged one last blade before he died. The mirror opposite of its original. The Sword of Darkness.

SCENE: [Instead of light, a dark void burns deep into the surface of this blade. Haunting and ominous.

We are next in an epic battlefield on Eternia.]

EVIL-LYN: Both blades, being born of magic gave amazing powers to anyone who held them. And so they were sought after.

SCENE: [On a hilltop plateau, a colossal army marches with enough feet to rattle the earth. Thousands of soldiers, all clad in high-tech battle gear. Think of something out of feudal Japan but poly-alloy and with a hint of alien texture.]

EVIL-LYN: Over thousands of years, the swords faced each other army times…

SCENE: [The leader of the army, a king we will come to know as GRAYSKULL (40s), stands at the front and raises the Sword of Light, which bathes his army in a majestic light. On the other of the battlefield: a different army emerges from the fog. Dark and intimidating. Monstrous, snarling BEASTS, augmented by a complex nano-technology that fuses their bodies with mechanical parts. Half monster, half machine. Their leader, a creature masked in thick armor, lifts up the Sword of Darkness. It spreads a black cloud over the army, fueling their bizarre technology with energy.]

EVIL-LYN: …until one battle changed it all.

SCENE: [On Grayskull's side, the soldiers' battle armor suddenly grows around them like a mechanical shell, encasing their bodies in a high tech metal poly-alloy. On the other side, the snarling beasts rise up, their hydraulic parts expanding and enhancing their size. The two armies run straight at each other and clash violently. Awesome advanced warfare. Mix high tech, swords, and otherworldly creatures and you have a sense of what Eternia's all about.

King Grayskull squares off against the other leader. During the fight, he manages to defeat him and cause him to drop the Sword of Darkness. Grayskull picks it up and suddenly the two swords begin to fuse together.]

EVIL-LYN: It was King Grayskull who first realized that to stop a war between two sides, you had to bring them together.

SCENE: [Metal wrapping around, metal, sparks flying, like a fusion reaction, coils winding down the blades and suddenly and finally nestling at the handle which King Grayskull raises in the air creating a blinding light that spreads over the battlefield. Soldiers on both sides stop fighting and watch in awe.]

EVIL-LYN: In that moment, light and darkness combined to form a life-giving magic, subjugating everyone under it's incredible power. So long as the king lived, Eternia never saw another war again.

SCENE: [We are next in a private chamber, where the much older King Grayskull lies on his death bed, surrounded by well-wishers.]

EVIL-LYN: But when his end came, his inner circle feared what no successor would be able to honor the balance the king had created.

SCENE: [Next at a table in the Hall of Wisdom (an ancient temple marked with stone ornamentation), a sacred site, sit six warriors. They are identified by ancient tribal tattoos on their faces. They surround the two swords wrapped in silk.]

EVIL-LYN: Six warriors, endowed with the magic of the blades, were trusted with separating them and burying each in a secret location. They were called the Masters of the Universe…

SCENE: [Three masters take one blade, three take the other. They embrace each other and go separate ways.]

EVIL-LYN: …and they took these secrets to their graves. For several generations the swords have remained hidden until now.



Good so far? Read on for what happens next..

In present day Eternia at the Sands of Fire, Evil-Lyn (30s) a gorgeous seductress with the same markings all over her face that the Masters wore, has found the location of the Sword of Darkness.

Her companion, obscured in shadow and wearing a heavy hood, scans the terrain. His name is Keldor (40s).

Keldor reaches for the sword. As his fingers touch it he suddenly undergoes a euphoric vision of dark wonders and endows Keldor with all terrifying forces of black magic. Keldor's hands wither at the touch of this power. His skin begins to erode. Flesh turns to tissue and then to bone. Soon the sensation spreads to his arms, his shoulders, his face…literally tearing the skin from his bone. He madly clings to the blade as we smash to the main title card GRAYSKULL: MASTERS OF THE UNIVERSE.


Weeks later, we are at Capitol City, the centre of civic life in Eternia. A stunning achievement of a civilization that incorporates advanced technology and magic. At the Royal Palace, a colossal celebration is und

jumboFri 06/06/08 13:38

wow more more

trinityFri 06/06/08 13:45

Whoops...not sure why half of my post got cut off :S

Here's the other bit (starting from the last paragraph):


Weeks later, we are at Capitol City, the centre of civic life in Eternia. A stunning achievement of a civilization that incorporates advanced technology and magic. At the Royal Palace, a colossal celebration is underway – the Anniversary of the Great Unrest commemorating Grayskull's victory many centuries ago. Young Adam (14) is there – dirty blonde with striking blue eyes. He's the kind of tough kid who acts first and thinks later. He is there with his father King Randor (50s) –the kind of man you'd have to spend a lifetime living up to. They have a father son moment where Randor tells his son Adam that a true leader brings their people together, whatever their differences. Adam tells his dad that he is not that man. Randor looks down at Adam sadly and wonders if he ever will be.

Meanwhile, at the gates of the Royal Palace, two soldiers walk the palace grounds as fireworks explode in the sky. The first, with a face that has seen the horrors of war and yet still stays above it is General Duncan (aka MAN-AT-ARMS) (40s). The second is just as tough with battle scars all over his body – Kronis (30s). Let's just say Kronis betrays Duncan, knocks him out, and opens the palace gates. A heavy black mist pours through the opening.

Kronis and several Eternian guards stage a coup and try to kill King Randor. King Randor puts up a fight and evens the odds.

A terrifying and powerful presence enters wearing THE CHROME MASK OF A SKULL, clad in armor, a hood over his head, the Sword of Darkness mounted on his back, the man formerly known as Keldor…

…now known as Skeletor..

trinityFri 06/06/08 13:46

And the last bit of the very very long post:


Kronis fires a huge blast at Randor who drops to his knees. Randor tells Adam to run. Randor uses what strength he has left and slices Kronis across the face who screams out and falls backward - MOTU fans know that Kronis will become TRAP-JAW.

Skeletor stands over a weakened Randor then he suddenly plunges the Sword of Darkness into Randor's back, killing him for good – our inciting incident. Adam watches in horror, tears forming in his eyes. Adam escapes and Skeletor gives the order to his goons to kill Adam.

Man-At-Arms helps Adam escape and instructs him to go to the frontier until the time is right. Skeletor's dark army lays siege to Captiol City and it falls tragically (like Troy).

Adam makes it to the edge of the frontier and collapses beside a cluster of trees on top of a hill. A Falcon perches itself on a branch above him - majestic, dignified, mysterious. Wind picks up in the clattering of branches, we begin to hear a voice, speaking in a whisper, manipulating the sound of the leaves to shape a language. The voice of the SORCERESS. She tells Adam that his time is not over and shows him his future.

Suddenly, a violent gust of wind tears the leaves from the branches and causes them to float freely in the air, forming the image of Castle Grayskull.

A beautiful stone structure surrounded by a precipice. Epic in detail and a front face which resembles a giant skull, complete with a raised drawbridge where the mouth would be. The wind ceases. The leaves fall to the ground. Then the falcon spreads it wings and takes flight.


Days later, in a dust storm, Adam is rescued by Zodak (40s) wearing heavy animal hides and high-tech gear strapped across his chest. A powerful black man, an experienced warrior. Across Zodak's face and arms are several mystical tattoos similar to what the Masters wore earlier. Zodak belongs to the Order of the Masters. Protectors of the legacy of Grayskull.



Apparently...for the next 10 pages or so, the story is reminiscent of Batman Begins, Adam gets mentored by Zodak for the next seven years and turns the pampered 14yr old Prince Adam into a 21 yr old bad ass warrior. There are other great backstories..which LR hasn't spoiled for readers. Plus there's more revealed on the story..which gives nice twists (which I won't go into).


Along with Skeletor and Evil-Lyn, the other villains are Trap-Jaw, Tri-clops (Skeletor's main henchman), and Beast Man. Skeletor's evil cat Panthor is also in the story too!


So...any thoughts?


This might mean that the previous movie version might be condemmed to the scrap-heap for good :)